Hello bloggers, How are you? . Today I was scrolling through the page to see which post I was going to do for the Summer learning Journey. I wanted to to something I would write in my diary , about something nobody else really knows , but mine is a twist, it was aloud to be fake it said in the options it is aloud to be fake , So mine is fake .
I made mine about a war and It was really cool writing it with lots of description in the story.
I have used it on a canva so it is done on a good document.To read the story then read just down below . Feedback : What is your biggest secret? and have you told anyone ?.
Enjoy my blog post .
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Hello Olivia, its me Parwin! I see you are also doing the SLJ, the challenge is on!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog post because it included lots of information about your story and what it is about. You also included what you made it on as well!
This reminds me of some of the stories which I ahve written because I have written a lot of stories and I haven't written like a war type one so I mgith write a war type of story next time.
I think taht to improve, maybe you could proof read through your writing because you did have some mistakes in your story.
Why did you choose to have your story based on a war?
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Hi Parwin, Thanks for commenting. I will check my story before I publish it thanks for telling me. I wanted to do it on a war becuase there is lots of things you can write about a war of what happens how you feel and it creates lots of information.
DeleteLooking forward to hear form you again.
Tena koe Olivia,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on completing another Summer Learning Journey activity - keep up the good work. Don’t forget to comment back to blog commenters as well as on others SLJ blog posts to gain extra points.
What a wonderful and creative story you have written. I am very glad that your story is fiction as that would be something very scary to experience. The character in your story seems like she is brave and powerful experiencing something like that however staying strong and continuing to persevere.
What do you think could happen next in your story? Is she going to escape and find safety?
Until next time, happy blogging :)
Emma
Hi Emma, Thanks for commenting on my story . In my story she is going to be alright because she will find something really sharp and then she cuts the floor and she finds food in a box and bottles of water. She is going to escape the window latch will get cut open by the sharp pin she got.
ReplyDeleteShe escapes and then she goes out this house and she lives with this lovely family.
Thanks for commenting .
From Olivia.