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Monday 23 December 2019

Week 1 Activite 2 : Defying the odds - Summer learning Journey

Hello bloggers , For My Summer Learning Journey I have choose to do My dream Job so I will explain what is is. So my dream job is to be apart of the Silver Ferns Netball Team I just love playing netball and I think I can be better and get up to the level that I am a silver fern .Silver ferns give up there time to go to netball games and leave their families and go across the world to play games to try to win. The silver ferns there enemies are Australia they could never beat them and now when they won the world cup they finally beat them and they felt so proud of there self and they'd could  go home and show their friends and family to show what they'd have achieved.

I have written about my things reasons I want to bed a silver fern hear it is.
Feedback: I would like you to comment , What is your favourite job that you want to be when you grow up.


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  1. Anonymous25 December 2019 at 18:17

    Hello Olivia ,
    Its me Alan. I did not know you was in the summer learning journey.

    Excellent job olivia and a very catchy title. I really liked how you made the photo.

    This reminds me of when I did this but I did not think of adding a colourful background in the photo.

    If you want to improve maybe you can put a colourful background in the blog.
    Awesome work!
    Looking forward to your next posts,
    Kind regards
    Alan

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    1. Anonymous4 January 2020 at 11:42

      Hi Alan, Thanks for commenting . Thanks For the comment about the title that was the name of the activity so I wanted to put that in so that the others would know.I just wanted to put in a colourful background because it stands out .

      I did add a colourful background in ,that is an answer for your improvement that you gave me, just have a look at you comment before you comment and look at the blog post properly.
      Form Olivia.

      Thanks for commenting

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  2. Anonymous29 December 2019 at 14:52

    Hi Olivia! It's Mia here. Great work! I really liked your reasons on why you want to be a prossential Netball player. It's awesome to know you have a big dream and that you are passionate to achieve it!

    Hmm, my dream job is to be a scientist that studies the stars, I want to take astronomy as one of my subjects in University, hopefully. But I don't want to go to space :) If you couldn't be a professional netballer, what would you be?

    To improve, maybe you could make the text a little bigger, it's a little hard to read.

    Awesome work!
    Mia

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    1. Anonymous4 January 2020 at 11:34

      Hi Mia, Thanks so much for commenting . Your job sounds really cool I would love to do that it would be really cool getting to study the stars.If I was a netballer I would normally do GS Goal Shot becuase i like shooting and I am good at it .

      I will make sure to make my writing bigger so you can read it properly next time.

      Enjoy your Holidays.
      From Olivia.

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  3. Emma SLJ14 January 2020 at 15:42

    Kia ora Olivia,

    Great work on completing another Summer Learning Journey activity - keep up the good work. Don’t forget to comment back to blog commenters as well as on others SLJ blog posts to gain extra points.

    I love playing netball too! I have played netball since I was 5 so that is a very long time considering how old I am. GS is a fun position to play, you definitely need to be a good shot to play that position. I am usually GK or GD and love it.
    Who is your favourite netball player in the Silver Ferns?

    Until next time, happy blogging :)
    Emma

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  4. Anonymous15 January 2020 at 19:06

    Hi Emma, I am enjoying the SLJ .

    Great to hear you like playing netball that is cool. My favorite netball player in the Silver Ferns Is Jane Watson . She is normally in GK. SHe is really good at defence. Wow! ,you have played netball for a long time i have played for 4 Years.

    But my goal is to become famous netball player.

    Thanks Olivia.

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  5. Anonymous21 January 2020 at 20:21

    Hello Olivia, its me Parwin!

    Great to see that you have completed yet another SLJ activity! I lik how you have included some great information about the Silver Ferns as well as why you want to join the Silver Ferns.

    This reminds me of what I want to be and that is a professional hockey player or just any sports player. Hockey is one of my favorite sports and having a job that you are passionate or enjoy is gonna make you happy.

    I think that to improve, maybe you could make the google drawing bigger or the text because it was kind of hard to read the text!

    Awesome work!



    Looking forward to your next posts,
    Parwin

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