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Tuesday 15 October 2019

My Future House

Hello bloggers!, Today I am blogging about my new home learning post it is about making my future housed on a document. I made mine on a google drawing so I can use shapes.  My future house in a mini Mansion. I hope you like my house it is glass.


This house has been made as glass and wood. The wood is the roof. The glass is the bottom of the house. it has 2 top rooms on the side.Hope you like it !.


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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous16 October 2019 at 13:42

    Kia ora Olivia, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School. (You probably already know that.)

    I liked the way you put what the house would look like and a bit of information about it. Your mini mansion looks fantastic!

    This reminded me of my homelearning blog of designing a new school uniform. Don't ask me why, honestly it does but I have no idea about why.

    To improve, you could add more of a description of the house and why you put the colours and shapes where you did.

    Why do you call it a mini mansion?

    Bye Olivia! Great blog post! Keep up the amazing work and keep blogging!

    -Amelia 😉

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    1. Anonymous16 October 2019 at 14:07

      Hi Amelia.
      Thanks for commenting on my blog.
      I called it a mini mansion because I wanted it to be a Mansion but it would not fit on the page. Thanks for the improvements I will try to do them next time.
      Thanks For Commenting.

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  2. Anonymous16 October 2019 at 14:41

    Hi Olivia this Michaela
    this is good and why do you what it to do a glass house like in the storms i might just might noce over. when you have a shower they can see you. Were are the two rooms are they the top two rooms. it they are not then what are they.
    Michaela

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  3. Anonymous16 October 2019 at 14:46

    Hi Olivia this Ethan here from your class.
    Why did you pick glass instead of brick it could break.

    Are there rooms in the top or the bottom? I think that you should have picked a mansion not a mini mansion

    Bye for now Ethan

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