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Wednesday, 22 May 2019

The magical Dream Giver Scary But Sweet.

Here is a video of what e watched to get the idea.

The dream giver video
Before we did are writing we created a monster that we thought was In the story the dream giver so this is what I created .
I thought It would be a person so I created a person that has some disables with his body it is close to thse thing that it looked like






Dreaming In my closet hiding from this guy that looked like he has not had foundation on for two years he turned around and looked at the closet but then he turned around and looked at all of my friends he had a glowing beg that had eggs it there.As he cracked the eggs I ran over to my bed and I jumped into the covers and i snuggled up but I forgot that I left my toy unicorn at the end of my bed I was not going to grab it because I was scared that the scary man was going to hurt me If I make a little creep. As quiet as a mouse I drift to sleep. Finally I have woken up and that crazy,ugly,terrible guy is still her but I do not think that he Is ugly anymore because he Is cracking an egg on me but I thought It would go onto me because I am the person but It goes on my unicorn then…
It Is a wonderful swirl of golden glitter then It put me to sleep like I am getting pushed down onto the ground then all of a sudden I am in unicorn land where I can see all of the unicorns flapping their hair at me like I am stupid and they are cool. Cupcakes there’s a cafe over across the road all of the unicorns are lining up in a line waiting for there food I thought that they can not eat normal food like humans.
MUMMUUUUM all I can smell Is burnt cupcakes in the oven I think that I need to go and help them In the kitchen but before I walked across the road this little baby unicorn came up to me and said ‘’ what are you doing here this is unicorn world but this is really your dream’’ I do no that but I came here in my  dream with unicorns ‘’ My name Is Hannah ‘’ said the unicorn That is a really nice name I said. Pleased that the unicorn Hannah let me in because if she did not then I would of got angry at her.Finally I got over to the over side of the road then I went into the back of the shop then I go up to a unicorn then I say hello do you need any help in your cafe because I smelt some burnt cupcakes over hear I said ‘’ No I do not need any help at all It is all under control ‘’ Okay that is fine I guess I will go now. Camly I walk to the tree that I came from and walked into it and said goodbye to everybody but before I went Hannah came up to me and said bye to me then I walked out then I see that I am back In bed then It is morning and my light Is in my bedroom but I realize that the window Is wide open like that crazy man jumped out of their then It is time to go eat my breakfast.
THE END
Thank you Hope you enjoyed it .
Have a good Dream.


2 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Delilah I love your story it has a lot of interesting words I love it....

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  2. I Delilah I think you could write your comment on this blog post a bit better than you so much for commenting. Next time you could ask a question?. Remember that when you write your comment that you have to make people feel nice because the comment counts thought you do not just write I Olivia I loved you story and it looks cool that its not that good for a year 5 thank you so much Delilah remember what I just said work on your comments.


    Olivia (: Kind Regards :)


    Thank you for commenting.

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