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75 Lyttelton St, Somerfield
Pioneer
Christchurch 8024
15/10/18
Dear Pioneer pool
I visited you during the school holidays.
Your pools they are very nice. They are beautiful and hot they are exactly the right temperature for a pool.
My favourite pool is the wave pool the reason why I love the wave pool is because it shakes you up and down. Sometimes I swallow a bit of water. I think it is really cool how you have a playground across from the pools.
Your lazy river is not really my favourite pool it doesn't push you that fast like other pools it needs a bit more pressure. You might need to remake it because it is not wide enough. people keep on pushing and shoving I have banged my head before on the side.
The little play area is a bit shallow. You might have to write a board of rules and put it on the walls so people can see them and follow them and not get in trouble. On your board of rules, one of them should be one way around the lazy river the left way otherwise people might bump into you. You should probably get some more boards to swim on. You might want to get more lifeguards to look after and even more for the counter at the front. I don't know why you have a little preschool place across from the pools. Your pools are great I will probably come back another day.
from Olivia
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