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Thursday, 27 September 2018

T3W10 Writing

This week I  have been practising using capital letters and full stops. I have made a book using google slides to write and illustrate my story. please have a look and leave me a comment about my writing.
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2 comments:

  1. Miss Walters28 September 2018 at 13:14

    Hi Olivia,

    You have created a bright and interesting story book here, ka pai! I especially like the strong words and interesting ideas you have, like the use of the word evil. Next time check that you have the full stops at the end of each idea - you have some correct, but there are a few you could fix up :)

    From Miss W

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  2. Anonymous18 October 2018 at 10:21

    thank you miss walters

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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
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